a “Red Wheelbarrow” poem

so much
depends            upon

a one
lane         bridge

blocked by
neighbors          talking

above the
slow                     river

Not nearly as pleased by this as I am of my rewrite of The Red Wheelbarrow which tickles me almost as much as my rewrite of the Grasshopper poem by E. E. Cummings.

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Rewrites of Famous Poems : The Red Wheelbarrow

William Carlos Williams : The Red Wheelbarrow

The High Divingboard

So much depends
upon

the high diving
board

glazed with pool
water

besides the white
chickens

-Remy Wilkins

[see also my rewrite of E. E. Cummings’ poem “r-p-o-p-h-e-s-s-a-g-r”, which entertains me immensely]